Post by Maya Jensen on Oct 24, 2017 19:46:46 GMT -5
Ok... so I'm still trying to wrap my head around this as to why we lost. So could I get some feedback on these RPs and what you guys think was the cause of it? Yes I did talk to Jeremy but I still don't see it.
Post by Roxy Cotton on Oct 25, 2017 17:06:44 GMT -5
Maybe you can tell us what makes it so hard to fathom?
Obviously these things are always a bit subjective, right? It's slightly insulting to just say you can't see it at all, don't you think? Jeremy judged it, so his logic is the only logic that matters here.
Post by Maya Jensen on Oct 25, 2017 22:14:52 GMT -5
I don't mean to be insulting but I just don't get it. He said that they were even to him and that a Abby's was the one that was a bit less. But I just don't know.
Though ok, this was probably a bit of a knee jerk reaction because truth be told I thought we had that. I mean their first RP, had just a 'prologue' that overstayed their welcome. Then a not to bad scene but then the MT was just a bulk paragraph and just didn't end very well.
Their second RP, again that MT part just was lacking as it just wasn't to much and I felt it focused way to much on the CD part. Yes I know CD is a bigger factor here, but isn't it a 50/50 split? Which I guess bothers me because both of their RPs I felt were a bit unbalanced with the CD/MT.
Mine was more balanced with both and while Abby's looked a bit too, but only thing I can think of is that maybe he saw it as 'uninteresting CD'. In which case I again don't understand, because you have two unbalanced RPs vs 1 balanced and 1 unbalanced and we lose? I mean was the CD portion that much better that it covered the unbalanced MT portion?
Again I don't understand.
But if anything. Could I get some feedback on my RP in general? See if I'm doing something wrong or what not.
This is not going to be helpful...I'm not a feedback person. However, I don't think you are doing anything wrong. You are an amazing rper and so is Abby. I would not change anything that you are doing, but I would try to weave in as much ongoing story as you can muster and I would certainly show the strength of the bond you have as a team. This doesn't translate to wins always...heck, I always think I am going to win! LOL
But like Rox said, judging is subjective. Asking for feedback here is one thing. We will all give you a different take, but at the end of the day, you will do what you feel works for the character first and judging will be secondary.
I wouldn't change anything...just build the intensity off of what the show gives you. You have a lot of skill as a writer, and it will show through.
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