Post by The Circle Television Network on Jul 11, 2014 6:09:06 GMT -5
Okay…I’ll bite! I don’t give real feedback on roleplays like I am grading what people do, because I don’t feel like that’s my place to do. However, I will let you know what I think of your character and how you have laid things out so far…
I really do like the angle you have taken with her. When you laid out her history and how she was going to be perceived, I wondered how you would pull it off and so far it is pretty darn good. I like how she isn’t a superwoman or someone that is unaffected by what is going on around her…for the most part. A lot of people fall into a trap where they become 2-dimentional and have no real depth. They go from match to match and event to event and there is no continuity or we don’t learn anything more about them. Not the case here so far.
The angle with Sparks is coming together VERY well since you guys appear to be playing off each other. This is beautiful and I am a bit jealous since I haven't had that beyond a mention from Crystal (thanks Todd)! This is how you roleplay and build some heat and interest in characters and storylines. I don’t know if you and Sparks worked anything out ahead of time or not (if not…that is seriously bad ass on both ends) but it’s engaging and it furthers what you have laid out and what is going on in the background with Sparks.
Looking forward to seeing how this plays out…if it is a one and done angle or if it continues on. A lot of times in feds, it is hard to keep the interest going when characters are heading in separate directions. So, depending on the match outcome, we’ll see what happens down the road…hopefully more if there is no immediate resolution on the show.
Hopefully I’ll be able to do the same with my angles…but we’ll see how this all plays out as I make a few tweaks and add some more wrinkles this weekend…
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