Post by The Circle Television Network on Aug 10, 2014 4:30:27 GMT -5
I guess I’ll bite, though I must preface this with “I am NOT qualified to do this.”
This, for me, was the introduction to this character…though others may have been familiar with her already. I was a little lost on who everyone was in the beginning, but I did find the conversation with Gib entertaining on its own.
Personally, I enjoy it when there is some talk about what is going on in the fed dispersed within the body of the role-play, even when it is not the central theme…but like I said before, I enjoyed Gib’s parts.
It all came together for me at the end when Jenny did her solo bit, so then I got the picture of who she was in relation to everything. That was all solid and I liked how it was focused on the opponent and it added in elements of everything else that was going on in the fed. I found that to be the best part of the entire thing (just nudging out Gib).
Over all, I liked it…but I would want to see more of Jenny on the developmental side going forward.
Overall though good intro...But was kind of thrown off by the beginning tone as it seemed more in place of the General Roleplay Board, but talking about the match at the end made me see why it was posted there. I guess I would suggest get the match talk out at the top or at least allude to it more in the conversation than keeping it for the end. Other than that it was good. I do like the Gib character although I am so getting lost on how big this ding dang family is and all it's connections. lol
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