Post by The Circle Television Network on Aug 25, 2014 5:12:37 GMT -5
I really did enjoy your role-plays. If I had any criticism at all (which is invalid, because you are my new Queen) I would say that it was a little too heavy on the back-story. That being said, I understand why you do that…you have to get everyone up to speed on who the character is and her motivations. I had a similar challenge with Oni, but I tried to play most of that out on the general boards so that anyone who was interested (likely not many) could check it out while I played out the present on the boards established for the show. This isn’t a knock at all…like I said, I loved your rps and I completely understand why you played it in the manner that you did.
I also really like the formatting of your posts (font size, color, and style). So far it has been really easy for me to read your rps. Of course, this is mainly because I am very old and I suffer from monocular double-vision (yes, that is real and it sucks)! I think I may play with doing better in that department as well since Chris (Nyako) showed me how to format outside of preview. We’ll see how it goes.
You didn’t ask for this, but I wanted to add…I also like the interplay with Twitter and your character. I am very new to this aspect of role-playing, but it’s pretty cool. Some do it better than others and I have liked seeing your interactions there.
I’m interested to see what happens going forward with the character…so my assessment is that you have done a really good job with her. Just my two-cents.
(You guys are better than me! I would NEVER ask for feedback. I am too sensitive and easily offended…just saying…)
Post by Violet Ripley on Aug 26, 2014 2:15:36 GMT -5
lol. Thanks guys XD
As I get most of what i feel are the important back stories out... there will be more present stories where i will involve Matai as well as her trainers Lexi (currently a bombshell in SCW) and the very pregnant and frienemy of Roxi Johnson, Kahlan Bliss Blaze.
I appreciate the feed back always helps to make me a better player!
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